Ah I Guess I Failed Again

My, what a sarcastic title you have there! Okay, let's get down to it.

Vision: This drawing reminds me of how I drew when I was 18 or so. It really takes me back, but the only thing that gets me is the lack of color. Three and-a-half stars.
Originality: Any fledgling artist knows that the best way to mature is to keep working at it and continue to create original images, and this is what I see here. Four stars.
Technique: Given my inspection of this drawing, it must have taken you a good fifteen to twenty minutes to draw, but as time passes, you'll find your place at the table. Three and-a-half stars.
Impact: Call me crazy, but I think this picture is suitable for kids in the five to twelve range. They'll love this! Four stars.

Overall, I think that there is a lot of improvements that can be made here, so as long as you can continue working at your respective craft, there's nowhere to go but up. In my first months as a deviant, I was rather inactive, and I posted my first deviation thirteen months into my membership here because a lot of stuff was going on. Then, as my audience grew at a rather slow rate, I began to interact with people online and on here and I realized just like you realize now that with practice and patience comes future success, and I think you will find a good share of it. Nobody, in my eyes, fails at anything unless they simply don't want to do it, and I believe that with you making your efforts known to a global online audience, things will look up. Again, like I said before, you can get better! All you have to do is mature as an artist and believe. Let me know what you think of this critique when you get done viewing it, because I'd love to hear your say on it.






Critiqued by Kevin 'The Skull' Anderson

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