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I Will Fight by IvyDevi I Will Fight by IvyDevi
The 4th in The Series.

UPDATE: I thought it fit the mood a bit better at night~
To start, the character itself could use work. The lines are all very shaky and need to be cleaned up, the head doesn't scale correctly with the body, and the arms appear as though they have no hands or bones. You used the gradient tool far to much, giving every thing a metallic look, and there is no reason for the background to be so blurred. Lastly, the moon is very awkward looking and blurred in some parts and in others it is very sharp looking. To fix the shaky looking lines I would recommend either investing in a tablet, or drawing your pictures out on paper first then outlining them in an art program. I would also recommend looking into getting a more professional art program like, paint tool sai, or Photoshop to name a few. Because the body is all very strange looking anatomy wise, I would look into studying some on anatomy. The gradient tool and blur tools can be great for enhancing the look of a picture, but shouldn't be used as something to cover up flaws in your art. The shading is very odd because the only visible light source is the moon, but the lighting you have applied to your character is different all over the body. I'm not trying to come off as a jerk, there is just a lot of room for improvement.
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Submitted on
December 11, 2012
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