Jessie Brooklyn

First off, this is definately one of your best. I really like the way you've done the clothes and the hair if really good. I like the way you've used all the different colours in the hair. The picture overall is well drawn and it has reasonably good shape. The eyes are kinda cute too and i like the lighter higlights across the hair ;D


To improve, some of the lineart on the body could do with a little tidying, the colouring on the face could be a little neater, for example on the nose you could try creating a shadow onto the face, instead of getting it on the nose (does that make sense?) Not too sure what that purple bit is on the collar, looks a little out of place, so you could make it a little subtle ;D

overall, it's really awesome ;D