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Jessie Brooklyn Official -Alternative- Art

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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

So, to start off, the texture is really really great! Like perfect! I also think the shading on her skin from her clothes is amazing. This has is one of your most detailed pieces! I like how you drew her nose and mouth too! I like how this is a very original piece; I've never well seen an artwork exactly like this or a character that looks like that! The torn clothes with the glasses? It that isn't unique, creative, and original; I don't know what is! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=":D (Big Grin)"/> I could probably go on and on about what I like about this piece, which is something that's certainly quite easy to do with something like this! As for the things that could maybe use some improvement; her legs. I think they could perhaps be a bit taller. The shape of her boots are different sizes, I don't blame you though, that's pretty easy to do! So...just keep an eye out of it next time. Her right foot does look a little bit awkward; I think maybe it could look better if it was facing the same way the left foot was facing, but that could just be my personal opinion. The vest looks like two ties or something stapled onto the garment, to make it look more 'vest-y' I would advise having it go up her shoulders, so it looks more like it's connected at the back. Overall, I love this piece and I think it's one of your best! I hoped this critique helped! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>